Event Topics
- Describe a time when you worked in a group.
- Describe a time when you had a problem with using an electronic device.
- 顺序连接词、动作词、情绪词和反思结尾。
Lesson 4
本课重点:用 Background + Activities + Feelings + Conclusion 组织事件类 Part 2,讲清楚发生了什么、如何推进、最后有什么感受和反思。
Overview
事件题的核心不是“事情多复杂”,而是能不能把背景、过程、转折、情绪和结果讲得有顺序。
Structure
先交代背景,再按时间线推进活动,最后用情绪和反思收尾。
Time, Place, Reason, People。
So there was this time, around ... ago, I ...
描述发生了什么、问题如何出现、你如何处理。
Basically, what happened next was that ...
事情带来的结果、影响、收获。
The thing that impressed me most was that ...
总结感受和反思。
Now, reflecting back, I’ve got mixed feelings about it.
Background
So there was this time, around ... ago, I worked in a group to ... It happened at ... I worked with ... The reason why we had to do it was that ...
Actually I can’t get this out of my mind. It was ... ago. I ... because ...
If my memory serves me right, ... Obviously, I had to ... since / as ...
Topic 1
You should say:
So there was this time, around half a year ago, I worked in a group to prepare an English presentation. It happened at school, and I worked with three classmates. The reason why we had to do it was that our teacher wanted us to introduce a famous city in English.
divided the task based on everyone’s strengthsheld several online meetingsadjusted the plancollected useful informationmade slidesrehearsed the presentation again and againIn the beginning / at first / initiallyAfter that / shortly afterwardsBasically, what happened next was that ...The thing that impressed me most was that ...Finally / eventually / in the endcaught us off guardI was like, “OMG, this is a nightmare!”on the verge of giving upwe managed to finish everything before the deadlinewe were all over the moonAt the very beginning, we divided the task based on everyone’s strengths. I was responsible for the speaking part, while the others collected information and made slides. To be honest, I was kind of worried at first, because I had never given a presentation fully in English before. Plus, introducing a famous city sounded easy, but it actually required a lot of detailed information.
Basically, what happened next was that we started to search for information about the city, including its history, tourist attractions and local food. However, one group member missed the deadline, which really caught us off guard. Though we were on the verge of giving up, we decided to stick to it. After we held an online meeting, we adjusted the plan and rehearsed the presentation several times.
Topic 2
You should say:
Actually I can’t get this out of my mind.
交代 time, people, place, reason:什么时候、在哪里、和谁、为什么要用这个设备。
was in the middle of finishing slidesthe screen suddenly frozecouldn’t move the mousecouldn’t open any filerestarted it several timessearched for solutions onlinefollowed some tutorialswas totally out of my depthcalled my cousinchecked the storagedeleted useless filesupdated the systemthe laptop finally worked againmanaged to finish the slides before midnightgave the presentation the next morninglearned to back up files earlierFeelings
be over the moonmake my daybe thrilled to bitsbe freaked outbe out of my depthbe utterly devastatedburst into tearshave the bluesfeel a bit downI was like, “Really?”be pissed offfeel a surge of angerConclusion
Now, reflecting back, I’ve got mixed feelings about it.
On the one hand, I feel like it was a truly ... experience because ...
On the other hand, I gotta say, I really learned my lesson. I should’ve ...
Given another chance, I’d definitely ...
PPT Supplement
If my memory serves me right, ... V-ed ... which, you know, is ... Obviously, I had / needed to ... since / as ...
用来快速交代:什么时候、在哪里、和谁、为什么发生。
But / And next ..., after that ..., shortly afterwards ...Then sb spent the next ... V-ing ...Basically what I did was that ...The really interesting thing was that ...What surprised / impressed / fascinated me was ...What annoyed / disappointed / irritated me was ...Recap
Background + Activities + Influence + Conclusion。
用顺序词推动故事,必须有问题、转折或最印象深刻的部分。
动作词、情绪词、反思句和 learnt my lesson 类表达。
Homework
完成下面 3 个 Part 2 事件题。注意用本课事件题结构和情绪表达。
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